高二短文改错

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高二短文改错篇一:高二英语上册名校短文改错天天练4

高二英语上册名校短文改错天天练(四)

高二短文改错

10

One day Daddy and I was going for a walk around the

lake while a girl rode past us quickly. Suddenly we heard a cry for a help. The girl had fallen into the lake with her

bike. Daddy and I ran quickly towards her. We manage to pull her out the water. Then the girl asked us if we could help getting the bike out of the water. Then the girl asked us if we could help get the bike out of the lake. Daddy wasonly too ready to help him. When we pulled her bike out,

she rode away even with saying “ Thanks ” to us. 9.

I felt quite disappointing at her deed. 答案及解析

1.was 改为were

2. while 改为when , 本句用到be doing…when 短语

3.去掉a

4. manage 改为managed ,时态应该前后一致

5. out 后加of

6. getting 改为get , help do sth “帮助多某事”

7. 正确

8. him改为her,人称应该一致,指前面提到的女孩

9. with 改为without

10. disappointing 改为disappointed

11

Jack was a heavy smoker. His mother didn't like him smoking,he couldn't give it up. At about 9 o'clock in one evening, Jack was seen

smoking in the living-room again. “Don't smoke in the living-room,

Jack!”said his mother in an unhappy voice. Heared this,Jack went back his own room and shut the door. While he was sitting in bed,

he couldn't help smoke again. About an hour later,Jack's mother

Jack's quilt was burning while he was sleep! She quickly got somewater and put up the fire. Jack was given a good lesson.“I'll give up 9.smoking from now on, Mum.”Jack said in low but determined voice.答案及解析

1. and 改为but, 前后是转折关系

2. 去掉in, 这是典型的中国式英语

3. 正确

4. Heard 改为Hearing

5. back后面加to, goback to somewhere 回到某地

6. smoke改为smoking, can’t help doing sth “情不自禁做某事”

7. smell 改为smelt, 时态应该前后一致

8. sleep 改为asleep或sleeping

9. up 改为out, “put out the fire”扑灭大火

10. in 后面加a “in a low voice” 低声地说

12

One Sunday morning, Li Ming and his grandpa are

feeding the bird in the cage. The bird was unhappy because it had enough food and water. Li Ming.did not

know why not. The next morning on his way to school,

Li Ming saw some birds flew in the sky. Then he thought

about the lonely bird in the cage. He decided to persuade his

grandpa to set the bird free. When he got to home, he said

to his Grandpa,“Birds also need friends!” To his delighted , his grandpa agreed.The bird set free. Grandpa and the children

were very happy to see the bird flying away in the sky.10.

答案及解析

1. are 改为 were, 因为前面的One Sunday Morning 已经说明故事发生在过去,用过去时态

2.正确

3. because 改为though ,前后是让步关系

4. 去掉not

5. flew 改为flying,这里用到了see…doing 词组用法

6. about 改为 of, 这里应该是“想起”的含义

7. 去掉第2个to

8. delighted 改为delight , to one’s +抽象名词“ 令某人…”

9. set 前面加was ,这里应该用被动关系

10. in 改为 into 这里应该是“飞入空中”

高二短文改错篇二:高中英语短文改错常见错误

短文改错常见错误类型

1. 谓语动词的错误是历年考试的重点和热点 常见动词错误类型有

① 一般现在时与一般过去时错用; ② and 前后动词时态不一致;

③ 主谓不一致; ④ 缺少动词,特别是be动词;

⑤ 第三人称单数形式错用; ⑥ 主动语态和被动语态错用。

1)(did 改为do 属于 ①)

2)As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories.

(visiting 改为 visited错误类型属于②)

3) There will an important game next month.(will后加be错误类型属于④)

4)One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out.( ③ 主谓不一致)

2. 名词的常见错误

单复数名词错用;注意区分名词是可数还是不可数;或根据名词前的修饰语或谓语动词的单复数来判断。 ① I’ll get good marks in all my subject.(subject 改为subjects)

②(word 改为words)

③ Without enough knowledges, you can never teach well.(knowledges改为knowledge)

3. 连词错误

连词包括关系代词、副词,并列连词and/ or/but等

(一般考查从句关系 who/ whom/whose/what/which/how/why/when/where/if/whether )

① I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. (错用了who的所有格形式改为whose)

② I teach them, play with them, but watch them growing up.(此处应该是并列的关系而非转折,but改为 and)

③ Clever as she is, but she works very hard.

④ When I was a child, rain was a mystery. In one class, I learned it rained.

4. 冠词错误

误用a和an(根据单词的因素来判定);误用a 和the(固定搭配,各自单独使用的地方)

多余的冠词或则少冠词。

① We may be one family and live under a same roof. (a 改为the the same 是固定搭配)

② As everyone knows, it’s famous mountain with all kinds of pants.(mountain是可数名词需用冠词,所以加 a ) ③ My teacher advised me to keep my dairy.

④ I hope you have pleasant journey.

5. 形容词和副词错误

1) 系动词后用形容词(be/am/is/are/was/were/become/go/感官性动词 smell /feel)

2) 词性的误用形容词修饰名词修饰 实义动词,形容词和副词,过去分词用副词

① I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together. (time是名词 所以要用形容词wonderful修饰)

② My pronunciation was terribly.

6. 代词错误

1)代词的主格和宾格(I / me; He/him; She/ her; We/ us ;They/ them )

2)反身代词(myself/yourself/himself/herself/themselves/ourselves)

3)代词的单数和复数

4)多余的代词和少代词

① Soon I began to enjoy talking to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. (express oneself,

me 改为 myself )

② One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. (加it)

③ If any one of us had any difficulty in our life and study, the other would help him out.

④ What’s more , you have to be friends with your pupils and take good care of him.

7. 非谓语动词的常见错误

1)不定式,动名词作主语,宾语。

2)and 连接的不定式或动名词前后一致(尤其距离较远时),

3)介词后用动名词ving形式作宾语。

4)某些动词后要求接动名词或不定式。

① Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was…. (enjoy 后需接动名词 talk--talking)

② But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sports.(作主语 改为 going )

③ Children may not develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves.

④ I particularly enjoyed driving through the countryside with you and saw the changing colors of the leaves on the trees.

8. 介词错误

1)词组中的介词误用,2)介词意思理解偏差,3)介词的多用或少用

① There are too many people among my family. (among 改为in in my family 为固定搭配)

② I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow. (去掉 at )

9. 习惯用法要记住

主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识。这也是历年高考常考点,其错误表现形式主要有三种:多词、少词和搭配错误。 例如:It was very kind for them to meet me at the railway station and… of

We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ∧ ourselves.of

10. 逻辑错误须关注

与句子的上、下文不一致,甚至相矛盾,属于逻辑性错误。如称谓上的张冠李戴,人名、地名、时间、方位等方面的错误,常是这类错误的考查对象。例如:

The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home. their

First, let me tell you something more about myself. 去掉more

… no way of setting the matter except by selling the set.Now someone at home reads instead. everyone

除了上述错误类型外,常考的错误形式还有:连词but, and, or和so的用法错误(可以归类为逻辑错误),以及冠词的用法错误等。例如:

She was smiling but nodding at me. and

It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. or

We may be one family and live under a same roof. the

短文改错解题思路和检查原则

1)句中各部分的结构是否完整,特别是每个句子要有动词;(句子结构与句子成分)

2)谓语动词的时态、语态;

3)非谓语动词的用法;

4)名词的单、复数,格的使用是否正确;

5)定冠词和不定冠词是否正确;

6)代词的格和性的使用是否有误;

7)定语从句中关系代词、副词是否准确无误;

8)并列句中的并列连词、主从复合句中的从属连词用的是否得当。

短文改错解题四原则

1)改动以最少为原则 2)虚词以添加或删除为原则 3)实词以改变词形为原则

4)以保持句子原意为原则

短文改错解题步骤

1)通读全文,掌握大意 2)整句分析,逐行推敲3)反复通读,复查验证

注意:答题规范!

高二短文改错篇三:高二英语短文改错练习二

高二英语短文改错练习二

▲ 按改错题的正确格式改正下列短文中的错误。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2. 文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。

改错一

We all wanted to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal you must do several things. Firstly, we should develop a good attitude to life. Life consist of not only sunshine but also hard time. We should brave in front of difficulties. Secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is the power. Because we have the power, we help to build our country and enjoy life better. In order to study it well, we need to do sports so that we can keep good. We can go running, play ball games or simply take a walk before a day’s study.

改错二

Never shall I forget the writing class presented to our English teacher

today.

Yesterday Mr Wang, our English teacher, told us that many other

teachers would visit writing class he would present to us. We were looking

forward to it. It struck us as a big surprise was that Mr Wang, who was used to be punctual, didn’t appear when the school bell had rung. The teachers sit behind the class were quite puzzled. We were quite worried about him,

wondered what might have happened to him. Five minutes late, Mr Wang showed out in front of us! On the blackboard was the writing titles: When

Our English Teacher Was Later for Class… Only then we realize that he had intended to be late!

改错三

I’m a senior student and I’m now in the need of your help although I

can’t stand the great pressure.

Every day I have to have lesson at school for nine hours and take at

least three to four hours doing my homework at home. Our teenagers are eager to play and enjoy ourselves, but we hardly have any time to do that we want. Besides, we don’t even have enough sleep.

There seem to have three cases about the overload: the pressure of

examinations, too many homework and high expectations from the parents. We often warned that if we don’t do our best we won’t have the chance to go university. The pressure often makes me awake at night.

改错四

Dear Xiaohua,

It is four days since Mother accepted the operation.She is feeling much

more better. The doctors told me the operation was successful, but because her old age she had to stay in hospital for other two weeks. The doctors also say it was quite necessary for her to do so. We expect to get a full report in two and three days. Please tell the good news to the rest of family as soon as possible. You needn’t to come here. I’m able to look after Mother myself.

You’d better send flowers to Mother. She will feel happily.

Yours,

Xiaohui

改错五

One afternoon,when I were on my way home,the weather changed

suddenly. Dark clouds were gathered.I began to feel worried so I didn't have a raincoat or umbrella with me.It soon started to rain.Just when I was hurrying home,I heard of someone calling me from behind.I turned to have a look and find that he was Liu Wei,a good neighbour of mine.He offered to share his umbrella to me.We walked all the ways home.Without Liu Wei's help,I would have got wet to the skin.How thankfully I was for his help!

改错六

There are different train ticket for people to choose from when traveled

by train. They may want to buy a single ticket and a return ticket. A single

ticket allows them enjoy more freedom at their destination while a return not

only is cheaper but also save them the trouble of buying the ticket when they decide to return. Some people prefer hard seats to soft one. Young people like to have hard seats because enjoy the company of other passengers is what they need during a journey. Businessmen would not like to have soft seats. They want to have a good rest. When they get off the train,they were still energetic and can rapid go on to do their jobs.

改错七

Dear editor,

I am a high school student. A few days before,one of my very good friend told me that he was going to stop the school. He said that he wanted to start his own business. I tried my best to get him change his mind, but failed. I know it is difficult of him to change his mind. He is not doing so good in his studies, yet I want to insist that I give it a try. The process is more important than the results. Now there are only 90 days leaving before the test. I am not sure that his decision is right or wrong. I needed your advice.

总结与反思:

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Key to Test 1

1. wanted? want 2. you? we 3. consist?consists 4. time? times

5. should ∧ brave: be7. Because?If/When 8. study 9. good? well 10. before?after

[解析] 6. Knowledge is power:知识就是力量。 9. keep well:保持身体健康。 Key to Test 2

1. to?by 2. visit ∧writing: the 3. It?What 4. used to 5 sit?sitting

6. wondered? wondering 7. late?later8. out?up 9. titles?title10. then∧we: did

[解析] 3. what引导一个主语从句,意为:令我们很是吃惊的是??。8. show up:露面。10. 注意倒装结构。

Key to Test 3

2. although?because3. lesson ?lessons 4. take?spend

5. Our? We 6. that ?what7. have?be8. many? much

9. we∧often: are 10. go ∧university: to

[解析] 1. in need of :需要。 5. 根据句意,是“我们学生”不是“我们的学生”。

Key to Test 4

1. accepted→received 2. 去掉more3. because后加of 4. other→another

5. say→said6. and→or 7. family前加the 8. 去掉to 9. myself前加by 85. happily→happy

Key to Test 5

1. were改为was 2. gathered改为gathering 3. so 改为because或as

4. umbrella 前加an 5. of去掉 6. find 改为found 7. he 改为it

8. to 改为with 9. ways 改为way10. thankfully改为thankful

Key to Test 6

1. ticket 改为tickets 2. traveled 改为traveling3. and 改为 or 4. enjoy前加to 5. save 改为saves6. one 改为ones 7. enjoy改为enjoying

8. not去掉 9. were改为are10. rapid改为rapidly

1. before改为ago 2. friend改为friends3. the school 的the去掉

4. change前加to 5. of 改为for 6. good 改为 well 7. I 改为he

8. leaving 改为 left 9. that改为 whether 10. needed 改为need

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